nice lines...it reminded me one of Taylor swift songs "mine".........indeed marriage "To love and to hold,In sickness and in health,To compromise and to forgive,As long as we shall live."...grt lines :)
Saikat, I haven't heard "Mine", but I am going to...Thanks for the comment...
Wonderful lines...All married folks will be able to perfectly relate to that...And there is something very romantic about patching up after a heated agreement
This poem is about Marriage in totality....So I am glad, that you liked it....
Jaish, romantic to have patch up after a fight? This poem reminds me why I dislike marriage so much!
Hmmm....Bhavana... Well, there is always two ways to see everything....Like I said before, its about marriage in totality.... Fights and the make up too... :)
very true. that's what marriages are all about. great lines. :)
Appreciate it, D
You write well... very well put thoughts
Thoughts are what makes a poem beautiful....Thanks.
very well written loved the simple message
Thanks Vikram, Glad that you got the message...
A perfectly written poem especially for a married couple, where fights takes place regularly. :)
Happy to know that you think the poem reflects the truth, Rohan...
Excellent poem :)
Thanks, Neha... :)
very sweet,lovely poem...very soft
Seema...I guess you can relate to it...Thanks.
well thats what marriage is about ...the fights and the heartaches just add to the tanginess....superb !
Thanks TTT, I am happy that you liked this poem too...
Marriage is a mixed blessings - it can be irksome and it can be a blessing too. The idea is to find the happy medium.Let is evolve and enjoy the ride.You have employed a conversational style that reminded me of the lyrics from a Dire Straits song.Keep writing.
Marriage is a mixture of everything, and that is what I am trying to say..Glad that you understood the point....
genuinely sweet and heartfelt... loved it.