4 Little Words!!!!

I have sat thru such a long time,
Waiting for you to tell me those 4 little words,
That you simply do not want to tell.

The stars and the moon will all be my witnesses,
Cause they know of all the times,
I have sat listening awake to their stories,

Can you feel anything in you?
Can't you just look into your soul,
I know for real, there's my love inside of you.

So hurry up before its late,
I can wait but not till very long.
The years are passing and so is my age.

I lay in wait for you to speak those 4 little words,
Just those 04 little words,
Which will result in me saying, - "I do, I do, I do."

- A Poem By Fizz

10 comments:

  1. From 1-7-2-3 the words go to 1-2,1-2,1-2
    Nice poem Fizz :)

    Regards,

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. I don't analyze the way I write my poems. Its just feelings at that time, I write them. Full stop.

      But I guess you do Jay, and I need to thank you for that. Maybe someday, I will write a poem on that... :)

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  2. Beautiful! Such a lovely thought! I can totally relate to the emotion in the poem!

    My world, my thoughts, my musings...

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    1. Thanks Upasana... Glad that you liked it. BTW, you have a lovely name. :)

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