I Won't Give Up

I won’t give up,
Not so easily on life,
Cause you have reminded me,
The reason to smile.

For some time now,
I had a life of isolation,
All I could see,
Was the bitterness all around.

Poverty, Disabilities,
Lie and Betrayal,
Made me feel more sadness,
I had lost the meaning to life.

My faith was gone,
All hope had drowned,
I was living a life,
Of total chaos.

That is till you,
Showed me the right path,
You unfurled to me,
The beauty in me.

You restored my faith,
So now, every time,
I feel my confidence shaking,
I still fight on.

And though you are,
No longer there with me,
I remember,
All that you taught me.

I made a promise to you,
And to myself,
That I won’t give up,
Not so easily on life.

~A Poem By Fizz


  1. its really nice ....this is best way to live life...nicely written..

  2. I liked it ending on a positive thought. Life is too precious to be turned down for anything! Thumbs up!!

    1. I like the positivity too... And thanks for your constant feedback... I look forward to it always... :)

  3. A really inspiring poem ... loved it !!!

  4. Inspiring lines truly depicting what life is all about... great poem dear..

  5. Very well written, vivid in description.

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    1. Thanks Ghazala... Was missing your feedback... :)



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