I Dont Want You To Leave

I don't want you to leave, 
Without saying a proper good bye,  
I know it is hard,
But it's time for us to be stronger.

Either hold onto me,
Like never before,
Or let me go,
I will manage on my own.

If you happen to leave without saying,
You will be taking away a part of me,
And I am already at a loss,
I want you to do what’s right.

Don't leave me,
Without a proper goodbye.

~A Poem By Fizz

13 comments:

  1. wow! I loved its 'let's-end-it-on-a-good-note' feeling.

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    1. Thank you so much Meenakshi... For always feeling in sync with us... :)

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  2. Hi Fizz,

    That reminds me of the film 'Life of Pi'. An incomplete goodbye can leave one broken, even if it is an animal.

    "I will manage on my own." Are you a manager, by any chance? :)

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog | My FB Page

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  3. Beautiful lines especially "If you happen to leave without saying,
    You will be taking away a part of me"
    Keep good work going

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  4. very nice write up... while reading it i was also getting a glimpse of a song... you have written so nicely...
    please compose such types of poems which is so nice and pleasant to read...
    keep up the good work... will wait for your next poem eagerly...

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    1. I am so glad Ashish that you liked it and are looking forward to my next poem... Thank you....

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    2. You are welcome. Good things must be praised and appreciated... :-)

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