Don't Colour Me Red

Don't colour me Red,
Don't colour me Blue,
But colour me with,
A colour that’s true,
Colour me with a colour,
That's so You.

Black is too boring,
White I want to avoid,
Red is a dangerous colour,
And Blue, well,
You know I am scared of swimming.

Green, I see everywhere,
Pink, I find doesn’t suit me,
Yellow reminds me of a Taxi,
Gold is too shiny.

Silver is too soft,
Orange I find too loud,
And there are 1000 colours and more,
But I just want a colour that’s You.

And then I can think of only one colour,
Every time, I look into your eyes,
I seem to get so lost,
Colour me Grey, I say.
It’s a colour that’s True,
It’s a colour that is so You.

~ A Poem By Fizz

The above lines inspired a Rat to suggest the following lines. Hope you like them.

With a palette full of colour,
To paint me all over,
No red, no blue,
I love the hue,
That is so you.

24 comments:

  1. OMG! That's simply superb ... so touching.

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    1. I appreciate your inspiring comments a lot... Cant thank you enough, Arumugamji.

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  2. Colour me with a colour,
    That's so You.

    this line is awsm most and...beauty of the whole poetry:)

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    1. Same pinch... These are my fav lines as well, Roshan.

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  3. awesome writing.. loved it.

    With a palette full of color
    To paint me all over
    No red, no blue
    I love the hue
    That is so you...!

    Happy Holi.. :-)

    A Rat's Nibble

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    1. I hope I have done full justice to you... Let me know. :)

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    1. Yup.... It is... I hope you enjoyed your Holi...

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    1. Thanks Vishal... I hope you had a great Holi too...

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  6. Loved the poem! A color that is true.. a color that is so you... beautiful! :)

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    1. Thank you, Rashmi... So whats your colour of choice?

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  7. What a magical imagination and touching words .Awesome and beautiful

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    1. The powers of the mind... I am glad, you liked it Freedom...

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    1. Thanks Alka... Your feedback means a lot... :)

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  9. That is a simple pretty poem for holi

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