Short Love Breakup Poem- As I Walk Alone...


I walk alone on the road,
And for some time now,
It seems too long,

So I look behind,
To see if you are there,
But all I see is Darkness everywhere.

I am afraid, to walk into the unknown,
But as I pray,
I remember you the most.

I remember the time we were together,
Of all the instances,
We were there for each other.

I remember the moment I last spoke to you,
Asking you to care for me,
You seemed afraid to let me be.

I always believed that,
My Love would be your strength,
I walked away to see, If you would come after me....

See the person who loved you the most,
But your pride and ego,
Were more than me.

As I walk alone,
I will continue on life’s Journey,
A bit hurt, but much Stronger.

~ A Poem by Fizaah Faiyaz


30 comments:

  1. Sometimes, loneliness can give more strength than company.. Nice words!

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  2. very fine piece of writing... can feel the underlying pain which you have depicted beautifully by the use of wonderful words...

    the last line is very impressive and motivating...
    "As I walk alone, I will continue on life’s Journey,
    A bit hurt, but much Stronger."

    sad poems too has their own taste... keep writing... :)

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  3. simply awesome...

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  4. You do come out stronger from setbacks, only belief in life should be there. I liked the message it gave.

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    1. Thanks Meenakshi... It feels like such a blessing when I read your positive comments. :)

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  5. ur best at expressing love in verses !!!

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    1. I am glad you like to read - Love in Verses... :)

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  6. very nice poem. heart touching.

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  7. Beautiful Words.. Keep it up Girl

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    1. Thanks for the encouragement, Boy!!!! :)

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  8. Very deep words.
    Beautifully written. :)

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    1. Glad to hear that... I appreciate it...

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  10. A beautiful piece...
    'As I walk alone,
    I will continue on life’s Journey,
    A bit hurt, but much Stronger' - these lines definitely strikes a chord with me! :)

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    1. I am glad, you took the positive from the poem... Cheers... :)

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  11. Well written.. Sadness in the poem tugs at my heart..

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    1. Thank you Jyotsna... I can understand what you are saying!!!!!

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  12. Interesting use of creating stress and importance at the middle of sentences.

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    1. Glad to see, you loved the part... Great observance... :)

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