Breakup Poem: Why Don’t You Just Go To Hell?



For all the times, I was there for you,
For all the times, I cared,
For all the times, I spoke to you,
Do me a favour, just go to hell.

I am no longer a doormat,
I am no longer your friend,
I am no longer your slave,
Do me a favour, just go to hell.

For all the promises, that you broke,
For all the lies, that you just told,
For all the times, you cheated,
Do me a favour, just go to hell.

You don’t have to worry about me anymore,
My wounds will soon heal and so will I,
For all the times, that you used me,
Do me a favour, just go to hell.

I want to scream out loud,
Never should a woman love someone so much,
But for all the slyness in you,
Do me a favour, just go to hell.

I may never trust so easily again,
I might not even get wed,
For all my broken vows,
Do me a favour, just go to hell.

~ A Poem By Fizz

24 comments:

  1. Dear Poetess, you are so intense .. you have the ability to put your heart in writing . As many times I read you ... some thoughts hit my brains .. some memories rekindle .. good and bad
    At times,for everything , we go through in love .. is worth addressing got to hell !!

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    1. Dear mysay, I write so that I want people to know that its ok to be lost. At some point we all have had heart breaks. But whats important is to move on. Stronger than before.. Take care... :)

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  2. So much aggression and frustration in those line ... the feeling is so well expressed ...

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  3. Very well written and it gives a clear message to the person who disowns and also to women to be aware of such heartbreaks.

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  4. I hope you get over this bitterness soon

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    1. Vanderloost, its a recollection... It comes and goes in waves... Thanks. :)

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    1. Its good to be extreme sometimes, Himadri. Not always though... :)

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  6. Have never seen you going so bitter fizz....
    Showcases the frustration very well...
    LOVE....

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    1. I dont use the F word, so I had to justify telling a person to get lost... Hence the aggression... BTW, the poem was actually written as a break up poem for one of my friends. Apparently its in fashion these days... What has this life come too Viti.. :0

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  7. so intense and so well woven .. :)

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  8. aaj fir kuch bhula hua sa yaad aa gaya...

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  9. The pain that betrayal and broken promises give can be felt through out the poem.
    He deserves to go to hell!

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    1. From what info I gather, I think he is already there... :P
      Just Kidding...
      But, thanks for the encouraging words Loco :)

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